Tuesday, August 6, 2013

Creative Writing_Hunter Chase Deer

 This story is about hunter chasing the deer and fox agonizing whether to tell the hunter which side the deer went or not. It's fantasy story and the lesson is not to tell lie. Because lie is not good.


 There was a deer named Lulu, a hunter named Max and a fox named David. Lulu was chasing a butterfly and suddenly she was so hungry so she went out to eat something. She ate grass happily. Then there was something sounded like her sister, Lolo was coming. She ate grass little more and tried to look at her sister and say "Hi". But there was a guy with a long gun on his back. She could not realize who's that man that look really violent. And soon realized that the man was trying to shoot him with the gun on this back so she ran as fast as she could. But hunter ran as fast as he can, too. And when Lulu was starting to be tired, there were two paths with lot of leaves. She didn't even think and tried to run to a left path. But one orange fox said, "Hi" to her. Lulu didn't have a lot of time so she tried to ignore him. But he kept talking to her. "What's your name? My name is David". Lulu was really annoyed but said "Please don't tell to hunter that I went to the left side". Then she ran away really fast. And like 5 seconds later, David saw one black man and  tried to talk to him, "Hi. Nice to meet you. My name is David, What's your name?" The hunter tried to pass him but fox grabbed his pants and kept asking "What's your name". Max was also annoyed to but said "Where did the deer go?".


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4 comments:

  1. You have written a great story using your imagination and providing the reader with a good introduction of the story and characters - Lulu, David and Max and the ability writing 3 interesting endings. You have illustrated your story well. Keep up the good work :)

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